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Aggeragua
07-03-2007, 02:02 PM
This is a little side project I'm working on, not sure if I'll go too far with it, but I've been playing with it, and I find it quite entertaining to write. It does, however, display my weird and, somewhat, dark sense of humor (yes, I know it is, so I freely admit it). With that said, read on, if you wish.


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The muggy night air of the marsh didn’t help the smell. The fresh scent of blood had long gone stale, and only an unappetizing stench of the dried stuff lingered. I caught a glimpse of a fly rocketing towards its target, the carcass at my feet. I wish I hadn’t picked such a close spot to the body. There was some gore on my left boot, and I had just polished it the morning before. I reached under my tabard and rummaged around for a cheroot that I had half-smoked that day before lunch, and a match. The leather pouch I kept there kept getting in the way of my searching hand.

The captain’s brunette hair fell down into her face again, and she, irritated, brushed it aside, smearing some blood into the smooth strands that would later cake to make a most unattractive headpiece. Her eyes were a hazel color, but were hard and cold, so very unlike brown eyes. A shame, really. I brought the smoking cheroot to my lips and sucked lightly. The cold eyes shot up at me and glared. “Put it away, Kems. You know the rules.”

I sighed, and snubbed out the cheroot. “You know how these cases make me feel. The cheroot’s the only thing that keeps the eels out of my belly, it is.” It was a line and motion that I had practiced many times before. It came out perfectly. Actually, I just liked cheroots.

The captain, whose name, Carmyle, which is an ugly name, shook her head. She stuck out one of her gloved hands. “Give me the light, though. I need to look at the nasty details.”

We were on the ramparts of the north wall that faced the marsh’s tree line across the moat. I could see the moon reflect off the waves that gently lapped the shore. The canals would be teeming with all manner of carnivorous creatures, seething with scales, suction cups, and sword teeth. I fidgeted in a nervous manner as Captain Carmyle went over all the details of the body. It was the body of one of the night watch. The tabard had been torn off, and the breastplate pried off to reveal a most unsettling mess. She shook her head, and ground her teeth. “Just like the one last month, Kems. Place is a mess. Guts hanging everywhere, knife marks all over.” She spat a long stream of yellowish scum over the wall, and wiped her forearm across her nose as she stood up. “Get the Provost to get a few good men to clean him up for the service. Did you know him?”

I leaned over to look at the corpse’s face, and Captain Carmyle bent down to give me some light. There was a big blotch on the bloke’s neck. I straightened up and grunted. “Looks like Borneston, but I’m not sure. How’s that malady of yours? We should get you some hot tea before you catch your death.” I shook my head. “Isn’t right to have a sick ‘un out here doing the dirty work. Your immune system weakens, see, so these flies buzzin’ around, they could…”

Captain Carmyle stopped me with an annoyed wave of the hand. “Skip the sermon, Kems. The damn thing will clear up in a few days. Just do as I ask, will you? I’ll get one of the other night watchers to make sure the stiff isn’t disturbed too much while we’re gone. And get me some of that hot tea, too. Bring it to my office.” She spun on the heel of her boot and skulked off across the wall, snorting and sending another poisonous projectile across the sky. I stayed for a few moments, looking down at the obscure blur that was a bloody dead man. Then I leaned down and went through the fellow’s pockets. I found a few silvers, and one of those nifty thumb rings for pulling back the string of a bow easily. I pocketed the lot, trundled down the stairs, and walked over to the Provost’s quarters. It was still well before dawn, but the poor bloke would have to do the duty, just like I did mine.

I roused the man, a red faced lieutenant named Fitzsimmons who always had a runny nose because he sniffed vision dust when he thought no one was looking, and he mumbled as he swung his bloated, naked body out of his bed. “They always have to die at night, you know? Always at night, when I’m dreaming about some luscious lovely and having a good time. Hand me those trousers, that’s a good fellow. How’d you discover the sorry blighter at this time, anyway?”

I respectably held my giggles as Fitzsimmons battled with the skin tight pants legs. “One of the other night watchers went over to ask the fellow for a light, sir. Found a right mess instead. Shameful business, isn’t it, sir?” I sniffed dramatically.

Fitzsimmons scowled at me, then waddled over to a bureau and picked up a black leather girdle that he negotiated around his planet-like belly. “See, if the stupid night watcher didn’t smoke, he wouldn’t need to go over and ask for a light for his damn cheroot, and this work would be left off until after dawn when there was light out. Thus, I’d be in a much better mood. Dreadful thing, smoking. Bad for the guts, don’t you know. Don’t suppose you smoke, Kemsy? Ain’t a healthy thing.”

I scoffed, tossing my lovely head back a right bit. “Me, sir? No sir. Never touch the stuff. Kills you right out, sir.”

Fitzsimmons nodded his approval and pulled on a blue linen shirt. “Good man, it’s a relief having such sane men such as yourselves in the garrison. Seems like there aren’t any sane people around this place. It’s the marsh heat, you know. Fretfully bad for your health. Worse than cheroots! Damnation, I have to get that mess cleaned up, now, don’t I? You know Barnaby, Kemsy? Frightfully mad, so he is. He likes to light up a cheroot, then place the bit with the flame inside his mouth and blows out instead of in. Says it’s a right healthy thing to do. Madness! Balderdash, it is, pure poppycock!” He pushed past me, sweating profusely from the hot night’s air that had invaded his cool underground quarters.

I called after him. “Mind if I use your stove, sir? Just for a moment.” He waved his approval. I stepped over to the small wood stove, and shoveled some of the brittle wood into its belly before lighting the thing up and placing a kettle on one of the hot plates. As the water boiled, I reached under my tabard and made sure the leather pouch I was carrying was still there. Soggy, but present. I tossed some leaves into a mug on a plaster sideboard with a cracked surface and a termite dancing upon its top, then poured some of the water from the kettle into it, before setting off for the Captain’s quarters. I didn’t bother to douse the stove.

Captain Carmyle’s quarters were two flights of stairs above Fitzsimmons’ place in the barracks. I pushed her door open to the sight of her at her desk, brushing the caked blood out of her hair. She pointed to her desk, a wee little plank piled perilously high with papers and folders and whatnot. I crafted a small alcove from the mess, and put the steaming mug down gingerly. “Any ideas on what happened back there, captain?”

Captain Carmyle threw the brush into a bin in the corner of her room and grunted as she unbuckled her stiff leather gauntlets. “Well, Kems, it was probably the same twisted cretin who did it to Washerby last month. Everything’s the same, the garroted throat, the carving display in his digestive system. As for who did it, it could be anyone. One of the lumberjacks, another night watcher, a sailor, those fairy tailors…blimey, I don’t know. We’ll probably never figure out because the whole damn thing, contrary to its appearance, is clean, Kems, clean of evidence. I’ll look again in the morning when there’s proper lighting, but we won’t find any leads.

“Besides,” she said as she sat picked up the mug and carried it to the bed upon which she sat her bottom, “there are enough nut cases in this town for it to be literally anyone. Like Staten, he’s a maniacal sort. Does everything with his left hand, and doesn’t even try to learn to write with his write or anything. And Xoser, with those absurd superstitions. And…well, damnation, you know what I’m getting at.”

“I didn’t know the tailors were fairies,” I said.

She stared up at me from the bed. “What? Isn’t it obvious? They’re flippin’ fairies. They carry their tools around in a big sack attached to their belt so that it hands over their bottoms. Know what they call them? Bum pouches. They’re flippin’ fairies, Kems, almost as disgusting as, gnomes, or elves.” She spat at the word, the rubbed the spittle around the floor with the toe of her boot, as if to squelch the particles into nonexistence.

“Then I shall be sure not to associate with the tailors,” I lied. Actually, one of the tailors, Castigan, was a real reasonable sort of fellow who was a smashing cards player. “Fairies aren’t good ‘uns, captain, won’t be anywhere near them.”

She nodded in approval. “Good to have sane fellows like you around, Kems. Now go get some sleep. And stay away from the archers’ wing. They’re having some sort of party and you’ll probably be shot to bits if you try to go near them. You know how archers are.”

I stammered a bit. “But captain, I live in the archers’ wing.”

She stood up and pushed me out the door. “That won’t do, then. I don’t want a valuable fellow like you getting shot to bits. Sleep in Lieutenant Dawes’ room. Say its captain’s orders. He’ll leave quietly and kick Corporal Tarrant out of his room anyway. Go!” And with that, she shoved me out into the hallway and slammed the door shut, waking everyone this side of Dustwallow. And so, I strode down the hall to Lieutenant Dawes’ room, patting the soggy leather pouch under my tabard. It had a kidney and a chunk of still warm pectoral flesh inside it. Sure that it was there, I picked up the pace and whistled contentedly.

It’s a right mess of a world I live in, and it suits me just fine. I’m Sergeant Reza "Kems" Kemestari, a decent fellow with a clean shaven jaw, the only sane one about, and a cannibal.

Aggeragua
17-04-2007, 11:35 AM
“What you’ve become,” Captain Carmyle said to me in her office on Wednesday afternoon, “is an important person, Kems.” I was quite surprised. I didn’t know there were any important people in the military at all. Except for a fellow named Marshal Mannilow. I knew he was important because Staten always talks about him and says he was the greatest man to ever put on armor, and Staten knows everything except how to make tea without having it taste like Private Boft’s tea, and Private Boft’s tea tasted like yams. I hate yams.

“Gosh, I’m honored,” I said. I really was. Me, Reza Kemestari, important person. Golly!

“I’ve been ordered by Major Maulsley to form a special task force…an important one, at that, to find the perpetrator of these tasteless crimes.” I thought her description of the crimes was quite wrong. “The only problem is that everyone on my list of candidates for such a task force is insane, except for you, and Corporal Wallet.”

“Corporal Wallet is dead,” I said. “He got killed by that South Seas pirate ship that ran ashore last month.”

Captain Carmyle smiled broadly. “He’s been cured of his insanity. Marvelous!” Then she frowned. “But two to a task force is not good. I need bodies on this job, Kems. Lots of them! If I have two people on it, everyone will think I, the organizer of this task force, cares not if these crimes continue. I don’t, really, because all the people who turn up dead are utter dolts and do silly things like write with their left hand. But if I have lots of people on this job, then it will look like I do care, and appearances are important, you know.”

“Why don’t you get last year’s obits and write the names of the stiffs up onto your task force?” I suggested.

“Brilliant!” Captain Carmyle exclaimed. “But why stop there? I’ll employ every corpse that ever walked Theramore. I’ll have a task force larger than any task force ever assembled. You will be in charge of this task force. And I will be in charge of you. Yu will be middle management.”

I smiled a very large smile. “Gosh, that’s wonderful! Then I can assign all my lackeys to do the investigative work while I report to you and you report to Major Maulsley.”

“Every corpse we have will be at your disposal,” she said quite seriously. “Make them earn their keep.”

“Yes, Captain Cecily,” I said.

Captain Cecily frowned. “What did you call me?”

“I called you Captain Cecily, Captain Cecily,” I replied.

“Well, why did you call me Captain Cecily? My name is Captain Carmyle, Kems.”

“Well, yes,” I admitted, “but Captain Carmyle is such an awful name. I figure that now I’m an important person, I can change your name to something that sounds better. It rolls off the tongue easily, you see. Cecily. Captain Cecily. Try it, Captain Cecily. It suits you.”

“My name is Captain Carmyle, and you will address me by that name,” she said angrily. Her face became quite hot. I feared that her furnace of a face wouldn’t set off the cheroot in my tabard.

“But you’re not an important person,” I said. “And if you’re not an important person, you can’t assign names. I’m an important person, so I can assign you your name, can’t I?”

“No, you cannot!” Captain Cecily squealed in frustration. “I out rank you, so I can veto your proposition to change my name. Being your commanding officer, I am a more important person than you in terms of deciding my name.”

“Oh,” I said.

There was a spot of quiet.

“What if I said it was for the sake of the investigation?” I said.

“I…” She stopped. She didn’t want to be responsible for holding up an important investigation such as the one my task force was assigned to. “Well, can’t you work around it?”

I shrugged. “Afraid not, Captain Cecily.”

She frowned. “well…gosh, I…”

I smiled and waved at her. “Not to worry, Captain Cecily, if we do finish this investigation…”

“When,” she interrupted.

“I don’t know when we will finish the investigation.”

“No, when you finish the investigation,” she said hotly.

“When I finish the investigation, I will be off the task force in charge of researching the tasteful crimes.”

“Tasteless. And when.”

“They go tasteless when they are left in the sun too long.”

Then she started screaming at me (Captain Cecily that is) and I ran out of her office before she stabbed me with a chair leg. She did that to Lieutenant Dawes last Thursday. Lieutenant Dawes survived. Chair legs aren’t too sharp.

I saw Staten, and he said, “Hello, Kems.”

I punched him in the eye. He fell over. “I’m an important person now, Staten. You must address me as mister Kems, sergeant, sir.”

He groaned. “No, you’re not.”

I protested. “Yes, I am! Captain Cecily said I was in charge of a very large task force in charge of finding out who the murderer is. That makes me important.”

Staten’s eyes widened. “Oh my, that does make you an important person.”

I snorted. “I told you so.”

“Would you like some celebratory tea, mister Kems, sergeant, sir?” Staten said.

“Sure,” I said.

Staten handed me a canteen of celebratory tea. I sipped it. It tasted like yams. I punched him in the eye.

Foonyak
17-04-2007, 02:46 PM
I had to reread the first part to remind myself what was going on, but this is a great story. Please continue whenever you can.

Inquisitor7
17-04-2007, 10:33 PM
This is a tough one to describe...it is definitely...different. Not that that's a bad thing. It certainly has the dark humor you mentioned in the first post...But honestly I'm not sure what to make of it. There is a peculiar charm to it, though. Hmm. I'm interested in seeing where you go with this.

Aggeragua
01-05-2007, 01:18 PM
I decided that as the special person in charge of the task force whose purpose was to identify the perpetrator of these tasteful crimes, it was my duty to interview the suspects. So on Thursday, twelve minutes after I finished a delectable luncheon of kidney pie, I sat in Lieutenant Dawes’ room at his (mine, now) desk, and made a list of suspects.

But I was presented with a problem. I already knew who murdered Borneston and whats-his-face, and that person was none other than Sergeant Reza Kemestari, sergeant, sir, a very important person indeed. Still, I decided to be completely professional about it, and instead of beating myself with a rubber hose under gloomy torchlight to extract information from myself, I would have a strong interview where I would entice the facts out of me using my infinite reserves of charm.

That was how on Thursday, eighteen minutes after lunch, I ran into myself and asked if I could interview me. I agreed readily, as I am such an agreeable fellow. So I sat down in the only chair in the room, as did I, and I started with my opening statement, intended to knock me into a state of confusion.

“Sergeant Reza Kemestari of the Theramore Guards, Special Person Division, Captain Cecily as your commanding officer… as you know, Borneston, a fellow with whom you were loosely acquainted at your midday meal and some time before, was brutally murdered, and I suspect that you, Sergeant Reza Kemestari of the Theramore Guards, Special Person Division, Captain Cecily as your commanding officer, are the perpetrator of this horrific crime, as well as the perpetrator of the murder of the other bloke whose name eludes me.”

“I believe his name was Olizibeth, Private First Class, mister Kems, Sergeant, sir,” I said.

“Ah, that’s it. Thank you, you are such an agreeable fellow, Sergeant Kems.”

I beamed. “I know. So are you.”

“Aren’t I?”

“Indeed.”

“Well, let’s not diddle about with such pleasantries,” I told myself, regaining my gruff attitude. “Where were you on Tuesday, early morning, at…”

I interrupted myself. “Why, mister Kems, Sergeant, sir, I was across the sea visiting my sick uncle Bernardindario, and I was caring for him, nursing his crippled body back to a sprightly state.” Ha! That would boggle me. I knew I knew that I had done it, but if I kept lying to myself I would have to cut off this interrogation to review the data I had collected.

“Were you now?” I said, quite confused. Questions popped into my head like great big popping things. Did I really have a sick uncle named Bernardindario? Was I lying? Did I really nurse my uncle back to a sprightly state? How dashing would I appear if I slicked my hair back? “Well, is your sick uncle Bernardindario feeling better?”

“Indeed,” I said hastily. If I told him Bernardindario had died, then I would have no witnesses to say that I was caring for my sick uncle Bernardindario. “He’s feeling much better.”

“Aha!” I exclaimed, jumping out of the chair. “Then I will authorize a message to be delivered to your sick-but-feeling-better uncle Bernardindario to confirm if you were, indeed, caring for him or not. That will verify your alibi. If he says you are wrong, then I will have no other option but to declare you, mister Kems, Sergeant, sir, the murderer of Borneston and Oliziboat.”

“Olizibeth.”

“Right, sorry,” I said hastily.

I kept my cool. I could intercept my message before it reached Bernardindario. Or would I even have to? I wasn’t even sure I had an uncle named Bernardindario. But if he lived across the sea, it would take quite a long time for the message to reach him. So, I said, suavely (I’m good at talking suavely), “Of course. I am sure he will verify my alibi. Uncle Bernardindario is quite an agreeable character.”

“Is he now?” I inquired.

“Indeed he is.”

“So if I asked him to agree with my suggestion that you, mister Kems, Sergeant, sir, murdered Borneston and Oliziphant…”

“Olizibeth.”

“Right, sorry. If he agrees with my suggestion that you did those two poor blokes in, then you will be arrested, for that is my plan! My plan is, you see, not to use his agreeable nature to verify your claim, but to prove you murdered them!” I was excited. I had me by the ears, I did.

“Oh, you misunderstood me,” I said, maintaining my suave self. “By agreeable I mean that he agrees with me, for I am all he agrees with. You see, no one else goes to see my uncle Bernardindario, and so there is no way to tell if he IS, in fact, an agreeable character to all, or just to me.”

“Unless I ask him.”

“True. But that would take two messages to uncle Bernardindario, one asking him if he is an agreeable character, and the other with your actual question. It would take too long to do such an ordeal, would it not? Besides, you would have to wait for a reply from uncle Bernardindario, and that would take ages, for uncle Bernardindario has no hands or fingers to write with, and has no pens, and so he must etch letters into paper with his toenail. A time consuming process.” Maybe I could convince myself not to delve into this too deep.

But I would not be deterred. I had a duty as a special person to find the criminal and verify their criminal-ness, and so I said, “I’ll do that. And if I have to wait an eternity to find out if you did it, then an eternity I shall wait!” and stomped out of the room, feeling oddly deprived of a victory. But at least I had time to organize my alibi. Lots of it.

What a devious character I am!

Aggeragua
04-05-2007, 12:35 PM
Captain Cecily ran into me on my way out of the interrogation room. Her colossal bulk steam rolled me, and I was forced, forced I tell you, to squeal in alarm (it may have been a squeal, but it was, at least, a melodious squeal). I had served with Captain Cecily for some time by now, but I had never actually noticed how large she was.

“Kems! What are you doing in Lieutenant Dawes’ room? Shouldn’t you be gathering vital information?” she raged.

“Why, Captain, I’ve made good progress already on the investigation. In fact, I have just completed interrogating a prime suspect in the murder of Borneston and Elizibeth.”

She frowned. Her brunette head, I noticed, sheltered a veritable legion of licey beings. “What? You have? Who is this prime suspect you’re talking about, Kems?”

I beamed. “Myself, of course. I’ll be digging up all the info I can about regarding this suspicious character, and it will no doubt prove to be quite a revealing ordeal.” I was, in fact, quite proud. I was sure I had done it.

Captain Cecily looked at me as if she had been lying in bed, and had just rolled over to see that a leech the length of a three foot long piece of wood was grinning at her and smoking a cigarette. “Now, Kems, you can’t possibly think to incriminate yourself! That would be…” She shook her head vigorously. I closed my eyes and shielded my windpipe from the onslaught of white flakes that spun hither and yon from her moppish noggin. “No, Kems. No. Don’t do that. That’s simply ridiculous. I can’t risk it!”

I would have asked why not, but I was busy shutting my eyes and closing my mouth.

“Kems, I assigned you to investigate this matter. If it turns out that you committed the murder, I would look like a total fool! Promoting a vicious murderer to the head of the largest task force this garrison has ever had? No, no, it won’t do, Kems. It won’t do.” She frowned. “Kems, how convinced are you of the fact that you murdered Borneston and Williebeth?”

“Olibezeth.”

“Olibezeth, sorry. How convinced are you of that?” She stared at me. If I wasn’t so handsome and surly, it would have burned two extra nostrils into my face.

“Oh, I have strong suspicions, but I can’t verify them yet. I need to collect more data on the matter,” I said grimly. And it was true. Uncle Bernardindario had yet to be consulted via mail. Unless in the last ninety six seconds, I had run over to the post office and sent a hasty dispatch to his address before running back to this room in order to be grilled by Captain Cecily.

“Well, don’t dig any further. Kems, this is important. I can’t have my authority in this garrison become the laughing stock of the military. I need you to find the real criminal, and by real criminal I mean someone who isn’t you.”

It occurred to me that I didn’t even know Uncle Bernardindario’s address. Curses! I had left that out of the interrogation. I would have to find me and question me further, unless I obeyed Captain Cecily’s orders, which I wasn’t sure I was going to do as Captain Cecily’s authority over the garrison was the laughing stock of the military. “So who should I interrogate next?” I asked her.

“I don’t care. Anyone. Just find someone else.” She began to stalk off down the hall but whirled around. “And for goodness sake call me sir. It reinforces my authority over the garrison.”

“But you don’t have any authority over the garrison,” I said. Captain Cecily turned blue and screamed at me, and I beat a hasty retreat.

Just as I rolled around the corner in almost-fear, I heard a single sob interrupt Captain Cecily’s curses.

Aggeragua
08-05-2007, 02:47 PM
I will be using this story as a submition to a writing organization, and will be adapting it to fit a non WoW theme. Hence I will not update this story any further, as it will no longer fit WoW and thus no longer would belong on these boards.

I also have no idea how I changed Washerby to Olizibeth. How embarrasing! Sorry about that too.

Foonyak
08-05-2007, 05:01 PM
Awww man... This was a killer story too. Oh, well. Good luck with it, and let us know how your submission fares.