I'm just giving my honest-to-God opinion, I thought that's what you were asking for. If you can't handle the criticism, don't post the link.
I figured you could derive my suggestions from my comments: try to make it more compelling, even story-like. Now it is basically a summary of the quests you have done, and trust me, people have done these multiple times. There's nothing there that makes me want to follow your adventures, if I want a description of the quests I'll look them up or start an Orc myself.
Sorry I sound harsh, but that's my two cents. I am also annoyed by your overly defensive reply. Be glad I didn't remove the link in the first place, as it actually breaks our advertising rule.