The Great Raid

Nicolaierdk · 01-08-2006, 11:30 PM

The rain was already busy, and the thunder was loud enough to even wake the dead. More clouds gathered and he knew that if he didnt find a place to rest... he would end up like scourge feed.

"well?!" sazzartes looked up at the tauren "well..." sazzartes thaught a bit and continued "you know i really hate the humans... and dont get me wrong! i just dont wanna run all the way from Kalimdor to Stormwind in The Eastern Kingdoms JUST to get myself some honor!" sazzartes took his feets down from the tavern table, took his coat on and left. As he went outside the stars bid he welcome it was a silence night and all was peacfully here in the Barrens, but he knew that it wouldnt continue as a massage later that day had reported a massive army marching the way to Orgrimmar slaying all in their way, their only hope was a miracle as hordes always a uotnumbered 10:1000, sazzartez looked at the stars again knewing that this... may be the last time he saw them.

Another place in Kalimdor Thrall and other importen horde Leader´s without the forsaken´s who hadnt showed up yet, was Discussing the Alliance raid problems, as the doors to the hall svung up with such forces as hell was uotside, a man stood in the door, as he stood there darkned in his Lich purpel robes and the hat which cast a shadow over his eys, just staring as a chilling cold spreaded in the room freezing with such a force that it could have killed a weak heartet human in a instant, two succubus apperaed in the door and took his hat "thanks girls" he said with a voice that could shatter minds "well the forsaken is here... WHAT DO YOU NEED OF ME!" he said with a large voice ,nor screaming nor silly, followed with a laugh as the doors closed...

///:Hello i am the creator im danish 14 and single, just to tell i am planning a 100 episodes dang ONE each weekend so have a nice gameplay

Stigg · 02-08-2006, 04:16 PM

Your english is good, but I don't really care to read a story that has every few words not spelled correctly and/or the wrong word. I don't really understand what it is saying either...